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Lassarina ([info]lassarina) wrote in [info]het_challenge,
@ 2008-02-15 23:14:00

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Current mood: accomplished
Entry tags:a: lassarina, f: final fantasy 12, r: valentines

The Theory of the Sky (Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Balthier)
Title: The Freedom of the Sky
Author: [info]lassarina
Fandom: Final Fantasy XII
Pairing: Fran/Balthier
Rating: G
Recipient: [info]w00bliette
Wordcount: 100
Summary: Strange how one's perceptions alter.

Ere this, she found comfort in solid earth beneath her feet, its unyielding strength. Ere him, when she looked to the sky, she saw a component of the physical world, not the idea of freedom.

He calls himself their pilot, and it pleases him to be in control of the panels. It pleases her to see his joy when the Strahl responds to his cues and hurtles through the sky like an eagle diving for prey.

He gave her the sky, and for no other reason than that, she would love him; in return, she gives him the earth's comfort.


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[info]w00bliette
2008-02-16 05:31 pm UTC (link)
So minimalist and yet so many subtle details to love. Thank you! <3

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[info]lassarina
2008-02-17 02:40 am UTC (link)
You are most welcome! :) I'm glad you liked it!

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[info]mahokiwi
2008-02-16 05:51 pm UTC (link)
<3 neeee, they're such good partners <3

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[info]lassarina
2008-02-17 02:40 am UTC (link)
They are! So lovely <3

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[info]threewalls
2008-02-17 04:28 pm UTC (link)
Concise, but not terse. I like the poetry in her descriptions, the repetition and juxtaposition that emphasises their partnership.

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[info]lassarina
2008-02-17 05:22 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :)

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