This is the same person who posted the first comment (hmmm, I guess at this point you can just think of me as "XO.") Anyway, I have skimmed the other comments and read the next two installments, and I just want to say ... OK, this is heavy stuff, and you're doing a great job with it, and you do write the most interesting fanfic, with a lot of depth ... but, I gotta say, you also write the best SEX. I love that it's not all about the sex, but at the same time ... whew ... let's not knock some fabulous sex scenes in a nice plotty, serious, thought-provoking fic!
:-)
XO
PS -- Hey! The confirmation doesn't talk about us proving we're human anymore! And here I was enjoying all the other possibilities of nonliterate beings.