I tried very hard to write a reasonable Ginny, so thank you. She really is one of his good friends (practically a sister. *g*) and I wanted to reflect that in this story. It's interesting, but I have received nothing but good comments regarding Ginny in this fic. Makes me think I need to be nicer to her in all my stories. :)
I love trio interactions and I have been working on them, so thank you for noticing!
The observation that their relationship may have developed a bit too smoothly has been a frequent one as well, actually. The "girly" comment is interesting, though. Was that just because boys typically don't talk or think about relationships?
Also, I suspect that Harry saw a lot of people traumatized in the war, and while I did write him as a more mature person here I do think he would have that viewpoint given all that he's seen and given time to absorb Snape's memories. I'd be interested to know if you thought Draco's POV was reasonable if Harry's wasn't.
Thanks SO MUCH for the detailed comments and especially for letting me know what didn't work for you. This is the sort of helpful feedback that I crave so I appreciate it more than you can possibly know!