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hdcup_mod (hdcup_mod) wrote in hd_worldcup,
@ 2008-05-10 04:47:00

Entry tags:

fic, pg-13, prompt: the world, round i, team canon

Even When Things Change - Team Canon
Title: Even When Things Change
Team: Team Canon
Author: wayharshtai
Prompt: The World
Wordcount: 5261
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None.
Summary: Disappointment or completion? The choice is yours, according to The World.
Author's Note: The World can mean coming full circle, having everything fall into place, but if you flip it, you get the opposite—a resistance to change, disappointment.

Even When Things Change

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	ships_harry 2008-05-10 08:34 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, this fits so well with your interpretation of the prompt! Love the ending that could well be a beginning, with things up in the air for one person even as the other claims that they're settled. Fabulous :). (Reply to this)

lilithilien
2008-05-10 08:40 pm UTC (link)

I liked the way you used the reversal of this card. I've always thought the flipside of that obsession Harry and Draco have for each other is that extreme resistance, and you play with that here in some very interesting ways. The awkward starts and stops of their friendship feel very genuine. You set up a world where their relationship won't be easy, but it's realistic and like the card predicts, it's the first step for something else. Really nicely done!

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