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Tweak says, "ain't nobody got time for that"

hdcup_mod (hdcup_mod) wrote in hd_worldcup,
@ 2008-05-08 08:11:00

Entry tags:

fic, nc-17, prompt: temperance, round i, team ewe

A Very Cunning Plan - Team EWE
This story has been disqualified due to unsportsmanlike conduct by its author including wanking while under sock.

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	ships_harry 2008-05-08 03:24 pm UTC (link)
	That was great! Your summary made me expect crack, so I was a bit wary, but it wasn't at all cracky - hurray! I enjoyed that story immensely :). The sex? Incendiary :). (Reply to this)

lilithilien
2008-05-08 05:23 pm UTC (link)

Absolutely delightful!! Narcissa was such a treat, with all her schemes. Definitely more of a threat than Voldy ever was! The dawning friendship btw Draco and Harry was wonderfully written, too -- it felt very natural, never rushed, and it was fun to catch that little snippet of conversation with the orphans. ('The Truth About Victoria' was giggle-worthy too.) And then the smut! The much-delayed, much-anticipated, much-interrupted smut! The previous comment called it "incendiary" and that's the perfect description. So amazingly hot! And of course then it all comes back to Narcissa. I do adore that woman!

So yay! I just found another of my favourite stories in the WC!

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meredyth_13
2008-05-09 06:03 pm UTC (link)

This was a great romp - Narcissa's cunning and manipulation, Harry's willing compliance, and Draco... oh, Draco's actually quite hard to read, but there's something so very Malfoy about him.

From that first 'awakening' poor Harry really does have his world and perceptions turned around on him - how wonderful that Draco is flamboyant enough to keep prodding his newly emerging interest in the other team! It's like one great, slow tease towards the other side, and worked wonderfully well!

Some great interrupted moments, and some incredible smexy action.

And yaye for a nice, simple, happy/snarky Harry/Draco ending!

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Delightful!

i_am_fae
2008-05-13 09:00 pm UTC (link)

A wonderful adventure. It is rather like a trip to a Six Flags theme park...a sense of anticipation (like choosing the first ride of the day), to the excitement of the upcoming event (like climbing into the potential deathtraps), to the rush of adrenaline before the dizzying drop that takes your breath away (just like a Freefall!)! This story built excitement from the very first paragraph. The unexpected twist that involved Marcus Flint just made a good plot better, and allowed Draco, in all his heroics, to shine.

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	leela_cat 2008-05-15 08:44 pm UTC (link)
	Narcissa has such a wonderfully twisty brain, and this is a wonderfully twisty story. Thank you. (Reply to this)