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@ 2008-05-06 08:11:00

Entry tags:

fic, nc-17, prompt: the chariot, round i, team ewe

Wheels of Fire (The Official Autobiography of Harry Potter) - Team EWE
Title: Wheels Of Fire (The Official Autobiography of Harry Potter)
Team: Team EWE
Author: captain_tulip
Prompt: The Chariot
Wordcount: 9,468
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Alternating point of view, offensive language.
Summary: Harry's been wanting to publish an autobiography for years; only problem is, he can't write for peanuts. Enter Draco Malfoy: broke, surly and the best ghost writer in the business.
Author's Note: Big thanks to my wonderful team, our lovely team captain and my two marvellous betas; ewe guys rock! A big apology to Harry — I hope he'll forgive me. :-)

Wheels Of Fire (The Official Autobiography of Harry Potter)

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	lilithilien 2008-05-06 05:34 pm UTC (link)
	Loved this! So delightfully unique. You've got a great sense of comedic timing, whoever you are. Seeing Harry's thoughts and then his writing ... it was so perfectly in character. And Draco's rewrite was perfect. Thanks for this very enjoyable story! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	captain_tulip 2008-05-23 05:24 am UTC (link)
	Thank you! This was the first time I've ever really used comedy in a fic so I'm glad that it worked out okay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it - thanks for commenting. :-) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	(Anonymous) 2008-05-07 06:58 am UTC (link)
	In mid-read, but quick typo catch: In Draco's first writing excerpt, the word should be "reins" not "reigns" (Reply to this) (Thread)

	captain_tulip 2008-05-23 05:25 am UTC (link)
	Unfortunately I noted that just after having sent it in. I'll definitely fix that when I re-post it in my journal. Cheers. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	spidermoth 2008-05-07 08:54 pm UTC (link)
	Very enjoyable read! Draco's voice is very good. I loved him calling himself a pervert! and all the "scenarios" he invented for how his meeting with Potter would go. He also seemed very enigmatic--sometimes wise and sometimes innocent. Very compelling. Harry was a treat! So naive yet intuitive--I loved that! Nice work! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	captain_tulip 2008-05-23 05:26 am UTC (link)
	Draco's voice is very good. Gah, that made me grin. I've never really written from his POV before so I was little worried, so I'm pleased that you thought it worked! Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	shyfoxling 2008-05-07 09:32 pm UTC (link)
	Yay! I don't think I have anything articulate to say to this, just that I liked it a lot. Cute touch using chapter titles from the series. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	captain_tulip 2008-05-23 05:28 am UTC (link)
	Well, "liked it a lot" is more than enough to put a smile on my face! Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-) (Reply to this) (Parent)

ships_harry
2008-05-08 02:43 pm UTC (link)

Okay, I officially loved this :). Short and awesome, and Draco's voice was made of pure win.

"Potter," Draco says slowly, his grin slowly morphing into an incredulous smile, "are you getting hard?" He grinds his hips against Harry's, slowly and precisely, and Harry's mouth falls open at the deliciousness of the feeling of a hardening cock against his own, even through his trousers. "You pervert, you are!"

Aaaaand I might be a little bit in love with him for this scene :D. Omigod, yay for a totally natural and fun interaction!

This was great :).

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	captain_tulip 2008-05-23 05:29 am UTC (link)
	Yay! I'm glad to hear it. Omigod, yay for a totally natural and fun interaction! I'm really pleased you think so! I was little nervous about their dialogue because I'm reasonably new to H/D so I've got a big grin on my face now. Thanks for reading and commenting! :-) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	hptwilight429 2008-05-10 11:18 pm UTC (link)
	This was great. I loved where Draco imagined all the ways that the 2 would meet. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	captain_tulip 2008-05-23 05:30 am UTC (link)
	Thanks! I definitely had a lot of fun writing that part. :-) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	leela_cat 2008-05-15 08:58 pm UTC (link)
	I liked Draco in this story. Down but not out and clinging to as much of his dignity as he could manage - at least in public. Nicely done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	captain_tulip 2008-05-23 05:31 am UTC (link)
	Thank you! That's definitely how I imagine post-war Draco to be, so I'm glad that came through. Thanks for reading. :-) (Reply to this) (Parent)