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hdcup_mod (hdcup_mod) wrote in hd_worldcup,
@ 2008-05-06 08:11:00

Entry tags:

fic, pg-13, prompt: the chariot, round i, team canon

Wall of Glass - Team Canon
Title: Wall of Glass
Team: Canon
Author: waterbird
Prompt: The Chariot
Wordcount: 13,400
Rating: PG-13
Summary: After the war, Draco Malfoy finds that some battles are just beginning.
Author's Note: The Chariot can represent perseverance, triumph over obstacles and the merging of opposites. Many thanks to my beta readers.

Wall of Glass

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lilithilien
2008-05-06 04:59 pm UTC (link)

The imagery in your story just took my breath away. I feel as despondent now as if I'd been to Azkaban myself -- and I mean that in a good way! I love writing that puts me at the scene, even if the scene is as full of despair as this one was, and I'm so impressed with how you tamed language to give this such a huge emotional impact. I think I'm going to be reeling from this story for a while. Very, very well done!

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	ships_harry 2008-05-10 10:55 pm UTC (link)
	That was an excellent read - such a believable look at Draco in prison, and I particularly enjoyed how you introduced Harry into the mix - the development between them worked. (Reply to this)

	leela_cat 2008-05-15 09:01 pm UTC (link)
	Such haunting imagery of Azkaban and so lovely to see them come together slowly. Nicely done. (Reply to this)