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hdcup_mod (hdcup_mod) wrote in hd_worldcup,
@ 2008-04-17 00:05:00

Entry tags:

fic, nc-17, prompt: the tower, round i, team canon

Ring A-Ring O' Roses -- Team Canon
Title: Ring A-Ring O' Roses
Team: Team Canon
Author: melusinahp
Prompt: The Tower
Wordcount: 20k
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: character deaths, EWE
Summary: Some demons are harder to banish than others.
Author's Note So much love and gratitude to my team members for all their help and encouragement.

Ring A-Ring O' Roses

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	lilithilien 2008-04-17 07:11 pm UTC (link)
	What a wonderfully suspenseful story! I like how the clues slowly built up, and you had me on the edge of my seat during that final battle. Really nicely done! (Reply to this)

greenjuly
2008-04-18 12:11 am UTC (link)

This was really good. A well-plotten and written fic, and I thought your characterization was very true to canon. There were some great exchanges between Harry and Draco, and I liked that you weren’t afraid to make the characters look bad to keep them in character. I don’t know that I buy them having sex off the bat like that, but it was fun how Harry stalking Draco ‘for evidence’ echoed Harry’s sixth year obsession of Malfoy (even if the ‘stalking and seeing him get off with another bloke’ scenario is becoming a bit clichéd). Resurrecting Bellatrix for this fic is a very original idea, I haven’t seen anything similar done before. And bonus points for including little canon details such as the Peruvian darkness powder.
Well done, I really enjoyed this.

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	leela_cat 2008-04-22 07:50 pm UTC (link)
	A lovely and imaginative extension of canon. With kudos for ghost!Bellatrix. (Reply to this)

	ex_ella_bane699 2008-04-29 04:20 pm UTC (link)
	I loved this story! The pacing was excellent, and your characterizations of Harry, Draco, and Bellatrix were wonderful. The idea you came up with was awesome; your execution was a treat to read. Great sex scenes too! (Reply to this)

	ships_harry 2008-05-10 06:10 pm UTC (link)
	Yikes, Bella, what a genuinely scary idea! Fabulous story; I enjoyed this immensely. (Reply to this)