OH, I love how in character Severus is here. Poor Harry really needs to work hard to gain his attention, doesn't he? ;)

The play between Severus' almost-there smiles and how Harry would look for them and properly translate them was rather endearing and I think I'd love to see a picture of Severus in this swimsuit of his...

All in all this story was fun, tender, and beautifully romantic. I enjoyed every single word of it. :D