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greykitty_fic on November 3rd, 2012 at 02:19 am
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ACK! I'mma die of love!!! I think what saves this from being too schmoopy (and it's absolutely not) is the way you maintain their real voices in the dialogue. I can especially hear Harry's "Oh did they?" I loved that. I wanted to clap for them. <3