traintracks ([info]train_tracks) wrote in [info]greykitty_fic on November 1st, 2012 at 02:30 am
Holy fuck, lady. This -- "...his breath coming in gasps that tripped over themselves, one after another" -- is one subtly wicked hot orgasm description. Also, something about Snape looking at the mark... That undid me, especially paired with the emotional, canonical depth at the end. Just...wow.
 
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