Roman's self-denial is so painfully obvious, and you do it so perfectly here. No, he's not looking, really, he's not. Nope! And the little things you had him notice, the little itching of his fingertips -- god, Shelly, it's just exactly what must've been going through his head!
And how much do I love that Roman has a type. CANON!
I agree with Aldi -- WE NEED NC-17 SEQUEL!!