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Place: Paradise City
Titles: As the prompts; I haven't named the whole story yet.
Critique: PLEASE GOD YES
Author: Red
Themes: NIGHTS 20. Sleepwalking, CRIMES 28. Trespass, THRILLERS 22. Scream, ANGSTS 27. Together
Character: Acetyl Diamorphos, AKA 'Cet
Rating: R to NC-17 in various places.
Claimer: This is an original setting and these characters are, in fact, mine. Dirty city moments. Adults only. May be triggering to other piquerists, dacnomaniacs, and to the morally sensitive. Otherwise, proceed.
Summary: Acetyl goes on the prowl, and his methods prove to frustrate the living hell out of those who follow in his wake. This is the EXPLICIT VERSION. If people would prefer I post a version that could safely be rated R, I'll try to cut it down, but in all honesty I'd rather not unless the community/mod(s) determine that it goes too far, in which case I'll definitely cut it back a bit.
Also, it's been a long time since I wrote something, I know ... I'm making myself write, to get back into the habit, back into practice, et cetera, and also to do a little low-level venting.
In short, I'm pretty sure this didn't come out well, but I'm honestly too tired to tell at this point. :p Hence, critique it as thoroughly you feel like, and I *really* appreciate any help I get. I'll do my best to reciprocate, natch'.
These technically form one story as a whole, but each was written in response to a separate prompt. They weren't written in the order presented, but they happened to flow together so I put them together; the flow might be a little strange, and if the tense shifts from one to the next that's why. Do point out incongruous tense breaks tho' if you feel like getting that detailed. I would greatly appreciate it.
( Sleepwalking )
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( Trespass )
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( Scream )
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( Together. ) |
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