Re: Performance: Olive Penderghast
When it came to his turn, Kyle blinked and tilted his head. He opened his mouth to say something but closed it again. He waited a moment before tapping his pen against the table. "So... I assume that those tears are real," he started out, otherwise at a loss for words. "This is something that really would have benefitted from a story to go with it. It's a shame that you didn't choose to go that route this time."
He took a deep breath, "still, the voters to appreciate vulnerability. That performance was full of that. It just had some nervous fidgeting peppered in. Which is something that could hurt you this far into the competition."