He could tell by her response that there was some hitting home. "It's not believable if it doesn't get you by the gut." He said pounding lightly against his chest where his heart lay. He'd poured in more than just words into that script, and it was noticeable to anyone that Achilles felt the same as every one of those characters. He'd experienced the same hardships, and if Charybdis could pull that into her character then it held the power it deserved.
"Focus on that and use it for her." He loathed when people read a script like nothing but a piece of paper with words. If no one felt it, then it's overall power was lost. It was all about the attachment to the characters, and if he could Achilles would be doing more acting in his own films if he didn't have to have a stunt double for the more rigorous parts. His tendon however always prevented that, and alas he was quite comfortable directing them into how he envisioned it.
She read it quite well, but Achilles wanted her to do it another time. "Again, different page. Flip through ten pages and start on the fifth paragraph" he demanded. He knew every word in that script by heart, and he should considering he'd lost over half of it to a faulty computer and had to rewrite what had been lost at some point.