|itrytowritewell (itrytowritewell) wrote in fantasywriters,|
@ 2007-10-16 12:07:00
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Hi. I go by the name of Crystal. I need help trying to characterize this one character.
You see, every time I imagine her; she always does the weirdest things. I have tried to replace her, or rewrite her character, but she always comes back. If I don't find a way around it; I might have to scrap the story entirely.
Her name is Jural, and she's a bit of a ditz. She was born curious in the innocent way; if you know what I mean. She lives in a society that uses wolves to hunt- yes, I know, cliche, but it's starting to not be so cliche- and thus, they base their society quite heavily on wolves. It is a gender-equal society.
From the time she was born; her parents were very lenient with her. But that was only because when she did something bad, she didn't mean to. *Unlike her brother, Ronas, who was very... rambunctious.* Edited because I forgot. Sorry!
Her brother, while at first slightly jealous at the attention she received(jealousy was resolved), protected her with a view that she was weak and needed to be protected. Most characters in that type of society would have smacked Ronas later for being so condescending, but no, Jural has to be the type to get slapped and then apologize for 'making' the other person angry enough to slap her. You know, Jural is one messed up character. She is most definitely mentally retarded, but even so, could she be that retarded?
Your comments are appreciated.