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disappear_npc (disappear_npc) wrote in disappear_rpg,
@ 2010-04-05 21:13:00

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anon, kojima

RETURN OF THE LETTERS

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In Kojima Noriko's Shoe Locker
(Anonymous)
2010-04-05 08:14 pm UTC (link)

(In an envelope with what might have been a pressed flower. Foresight failure seems to have resulted in it being very smushed.)

You're very pretty
Like an angel or something
Only you're better.

And your heart is good.
Only I guess not really
It's a metaphor.

It was nice with you.
Being in the same big school
As if we were friends.

And in the playground.
Did you ever go in there?
Guess not. My mistake.

Think you'd like it, though.
That's where all the angels live.
You would fit right in.

You should be healthy
You don't deserve to be sick
You've done nothing wrong.

Someone should be ill
Who is not you. Someone bad.
They'd deserve it more.

I hope you get well
One day, when doctors are smart.
You'll be happy, right?

But if you don't then
Maybe we can talk for real
Sooner. Not so bad.

I don't think that I
Ever really talked to you
You're too much better.

But I'll still miss you.
I hope someone bad gets sick
And then your heart works.

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Re: In Kojima Noriko's Shoe Locker

ohkojima
2010-04-06 01:19 am UTC (link)

Norio Kojima was not a romantic man by any long stretch. And he had certain standards about writing. Whereas some first-years raised on the expectations inherent in dating simulations would be more than thrilled to be inflicted with such poetry as he found now, he was hardly so open to terrible. His initial reaction was to tear it up, throw it away, and forget about it. A tiny tear in the corner later, he thought better of it. Better to use this to find the author, and chew him out for his magnificently subpar poetry.

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