What it's about: (my summary) Dudley's metamorphosis from chavvy gansta-wannabe into human being.- I really liked this one, there are a few spelling issues and the odd bits of tidying up that need doing (including an odd interpretation of what toad-in-the-hole is) but it captured a plausible teenage picture of Dudley and his 'gang' and was really rather fun and BONUS: Long and plotty. I think it definitely deserves a place on the list.