This is GLORIOUS. I didn't realize it was a collaborative effort until I finished, and all I could think was to praise the author for cleverly making those chapter divisions so that we got to see inside everyone's heads, because the insides of everyone's heads were too delicious not to see them!
Such beautiful language. Bits that stood out included Lucius's "You'll never have better," and "His fingers explored all the bits of Gideon that had been beckoning him ever since the man had pulled off his clothes." Plus the observations about leaving bruises on Lucius. I adored this!
Such beautiful language. Bits that stood out included Lucius's "You'll never have better," and "His fingers explored all the bits of Gideon that had been beckoning him ever since the man had pulled off his clothes." Plus the observations about leaving bruises on Lucius. I adored this!