This was incredibly sexy! The whole scene is so wonderfully intense (not to mention, really well-paced).
Your characterisation of Draco is perfect; so smug and domineering on the surface, but deep down he's just as far gone as Harry.
I love how you've really gone to town on the claustrophilia, too. The reader can really see how the enclosed space makes it so much more intense for Harry. And the smells! I felt like I was in that tiny little closet with them!
Your characterisation of Draco is perfect; so smug and domineering on the surface, but deep down he's just as far gone as Harry.
I love how you've really gone to town on the claustrophilia, too. The reader can really see how the enclosed space makes it so much more intense for Harry. And the smells! I felt like I was in that tiny little closet with them!
Wonderful work, as ever.