Daily Deviant
- there is no such thing as 'too kinky'
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22nd January 2012 23:21
Oh, I loved this. I like how convincingly Ron's and Hermione's dilemmas are portrayed (and btw, I really loved your Ron; he so often gets treated unfairly in fic, which makes me sad). And Pansy is a fascinating character here, perfectly Slytherin and so alluring in her seeming immorality. The twist in the end was great, and who knows -- maybe she even ended up saving R and H's marriage that way? (The 'final chapter' metaphor too.)

She came again before he spilled into her, his hand wrapped in her hair, and their eyes meeting in the cracked mirror over the sink.

Unfh. HOT. I don't think you have to worry over not being able to write het! *g*
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