Daily Deviant
- there is no such thing as 'too kinky'
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18th September 2011 01:21
This hits so many of my kinks I'm little more than a smiling puddle.

Love Hermione on top, love tied up Draco, love blindfolded Draco.

I like how Draco did get worried at one point, did voice that, and Hermione came back and let him know that wasn't part of the plan (and then gave him a chance to stop if he wanted to).

The image of him teasing him, having him driven half out of him mind with desire, begging her, was all so hot.

The description setting us right there with Draco, great choice to focus on touch to translate what he's feeling more naturally to the reader. It reads beautifully, I like your phrasings (i.e. get it over with or get on with it).

He pleads with her, asks her over and over again. Harder, Hermione, faster, right there, god, again, please, like that, please, please. Please.

You know, this worked so well for me. Because we know it's a please that is engaged and willing and wanting, and knowing he's asking Hermione for this because he wants and he also knows this is what she wants. Having her on top and being in charge but being given what she wants rather than taking it from him, it was perfect. Overall, it felt like they were both dependent on each other and both giving. Does this make sense? I could be completely wrong.

I have been wanting to read a fic exactly like this for this pairing for years, and there have been some that have been somewhat near, but not it exactly, cousins of what I've had in mind. But this is the fic I've wished for. Thank you. <333333333
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