Abjlfauolf are you sure this fic isn't for me?! (Actually, damn, you never would have known it wasn't if I'd just 'reassigned' it to myself. akatnamedeaster is lucky I love her. LOL)
OMG, I think this might actually be the best opening to a fic ever. Severus' RANT! Oh, god, how perfect is that?! Oh, oh, and then -- Sirius' response!! “So I got that you have wet dreams about me and you think you have a pretty little arse.” It's just... it's just... so THEM! ::flaily flail::
Severus being reduced to near-incoherence by that! Ahaha! Perfect. You've written him just perfectly for his age here. He's not yet the cool, snide, (mostly) restrained adult Snape yet; he's moving in that direction, but he still has a lot of his teenage impulsiveness and flailyness. Love. This.
He stalks stiffly as an offended Siamese out of the cozy dining room and He turns like a jerky automaton doll
Wow, great descriptions for him. Seriously.
And, man, I would quote lines out of their dialogue here, but I'd have to quote ALL of it. It's just that perfect. Brazen, unabashed, dirty-talking Sirius plus Severus who's disbelieving, disgusted, and intrigued in turn = YES. OMG.
“You don't turn your back on an enemy,” Severus snarls -- Oh, god, Sirius, you cocky bastard, you should have known better!! (Hmm, maybe he did... ::snicker::)
with a flick of his wand the thin cords he's so very good at, the ones he can almost conjure wandless in his better moments and which he's had so much more practice with than he ever wanted -- Oh, gah, that one line says so much about Snape.
Black says, in a low voice, “Like I said. Lube's in my pocket.”
Ohhhhhhhhh, Snape getting off on the little power trip, and Sirius getting off possibly even more on the entire thing... and Snape being a little bit horrified at how much he's getting off on it... guuuuuh.
His cock and Black's arse both glisten but he tries to be restrained, not considerate, not with Black, but to demonstrate he can wait, that he's not too without patience or self-control to wait. -- Oh, oh, oh! ::dies::
And then... the penetration... that whole bit... Nnnnnnnnnngh!!!
OMG, I think this might actually be the best opening to a fic ever. Severus' RANT! Oh, god, how perfect is that?! Oh, oh, and then -- Sirius' response!! “So I got that you have wet dreams about me and you think you have a pretty little arse.” It's just... it's just... so THEM! ::flaily flail::
Severus being reduced to near-incoherence by that! Ahaha! Perfect. You've written him just perfectly for his age here. He's not yet the cool, snide, (mostly) restrained adult Snape yet; he's moving in that direction, but he still has a lot of his teenage impulsiveness and flailyness. Love. This.
He stalks stiffly as an offended Siamese out of the cozy dining room and He turns like a jerky automaton doll
Wow, great descriptions for him. Seriously.
And, man, I would quote lines out of their dialogue here, but I'd have to quote ALL of it. It's just that perfect. Brazen, unabashed, dirty-talking Sirius plus Severus who's disbelieving, disgusted, and intrigued in turn = YES. OMG.
“You don't turn your back on an enemy,” Severus snarls -- Oh, god, Sirius, you cocky bastard, you should have known better!! (Hmm, maybe he did... ::snicker::)
with a flick of his wand the thin cords he's so very good at, the ones he can almost conjure wandless in his better moments and which he's had so much more practice with than he ever wanted -- Oh, gah, that one line says so much about Snape.
Black says, in a low voice, “Like I said. Lube's in my pocket.”
Ohhhhhhhhh, Snape getting off on the little power trip, and Sirius getting off possibly even more on the entire thing... and Snape being a little bit horrified at how much he's getting off on it... guuuuuh.
His cock and Black's arse both glisten but he tries to be restrained, not considerate, not with Black, but to demonstrate he can wait, that he's not too without patience or self-control to wait. -- Oh, oh, oh! ::dies::
And then... the penetration... that whole bit... Nnnnnnnnnngh!!!
AND THE END!!!! Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!
YES, YES, YES, just a whole world of YES!
...I think I need a cigarette.