This is SO GOOD. My head has been exploding the entire time reading it! The characterizations are wonderful, the dialog is smart and snappy. The entire set up is so clever. I love the Sirius voice and how he thinks and feels. I love Remus and how you've written him. And Lily is such shrew it cracks me up.
"You realize I can't follow along in your head, yes?" LOVED this line I couldn't stop laughing.
They were mild and also amusing, and since he and James would be brewing, they had dismissed them as unnecessary concerns. So very James and Sirius not to be fussed with details such as side affects. If it works it works everything else be damned.
even if you did happen to turn into a slathering, homicidal beast once a month. LOL!
"Rampant horniness is a side-effect?" Another LOL
Frank was a little too concerned with rules and a lot too unimpressed by James and Sirius. Frank is always so wonderful in fic and I love that he isn't here, makes him more real and palatable. I love that the Marauders have a thorn in their side living with them. I LOVED when Remus lied to Frank and then again to Lily. This; It was completely undeserved; he was just as mischievous as the rest of them and the best liar in the group. Remus could look a person in the eye and lie straight to their face. It made Sirius proud. WONDERFUL
The sex is scorching and out of nowhere. The story went from amusing gen to complete smut fest in less than a sentence and it fits perfectly. Dirty talking Remus is wonderful and possessive Remus even better!
And lastly before I keep reading: Two weeks later, James cracked. Not '-and then I buggered Frank while he sucked Peter off-' cracked, but enough. I died laughing. SO FUNNY.
"You realize I can't follow along in your head, yes?"
LOVED this line I couldn't stop laughing.
They were mild and also amusing, and since he and James would be brewing, they had dismissed them as unnecessary concerns.
So very James and Sirius not to be fussed with details such as side affects. If it works it works everything else be damned.
even if you did happen to turn into a slathering, homicidal beast once a month.
LOL!
"Rampant horniness is a side-effect?"
Another LOL
Frank was a little too concerned with rules and a lot too unimpressed by James and Sirius.
Frank is always so wonderful in fic and I love that he isn't here, makes him more real and palatable. I love that the Marauders have a thorn in their side living with them. I LOVED when Remus lied to Frank and then again to Lily. This; It was completely undeserved; he was just as mischievous as the rest of them and the best liar in the group. Remus could look a person in the eye and lie straight to their face. It made Sirius proud. WONDERFUL
The sex is scorching and out of nowhere. The story went from amusing gen to complete smut fest in less than a sentence and it fits perfectly. Dirty talking Remus is wonderful and possessive Remus even better!
And lastly before I keep reading: Two weeks later, James cracked. Not '-and then I buggered Frank while he sucked Peter off-' cracked, but enough.
I died laughing. SO FUNNY.
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