Really fun -- I was just rereading that canon scene the other day, and this fits in absolutely perfectly. The background touches are great: I can just imagine Severus making clear to Molly that there will be No. Hugging. And this line: "Er," he says. Idiot.
And the art -- mmmmm times ten. Their mouths (not to mention other things) are exactly right: sneer and smirk.
And the art -- mmmmm times ten. Their mouths (not to mention other things) are exactly right: sneer and smirk.