Well.... you certainly packed a lot into merely 1000 words. Oh my! I agree with many others - I really 'felt' this, felt each pov. It was visual and sensual and this is really a crap comment because I can't even properly say how... just.. how GOOD it was. I particularly like how unfettered Remus is with Severus, and the way that Severus is still so reserved, almost as though he can't bring himself to be free the way Remus is. Lovely.