This is gorgeous and heartbreaking. You breathe so much life into these characters and they are so achingly real. Such beautiful, richly realized women you've written here and so wonderfully hot. And so bittersweet... and after a concerted effort we have her dress and lingerie looking as if nothing had ever happened. just hurt, because it's just so wrong for her to be wearing it to get married knowing what's between them, and I just hold out hope that eventually poor Mr. Plank understands when the Mrs. runs back to magic and dragons and sexy dress-making women. Lovely, just lovely.