Hope this isn't forward of me - you may wish to join critiqued, as critique_my_rpg seems dead, and critiqued is more active [it's a community effort to critique ads and games, not just one mod].
Also, just so you know, in a color tutorial post on rp_tutorials, Your ad was used as an example how how to use bright colors on black without being blinding. Thought you'd like to know UR DOIN' IT RIGHT.