Yeay! I was so excited to see an update! I adore the warmth that you have suffusing the relationship between Harry and Severus. They are both feeling their way, wanting so much to be something to someone, yet afraid because they've been so disappointed in the past, particularly Severus.
I really like how they see each other so clearly, and are each so much what they need, though apparently Severus needs a bit more convincing!