"But it's just us. We're not in public. I'll behave then, I promise." To Teddy's dismay the tears were threatening again. "And I do love you, I do."
Awkward, a little painful; loved this part.
"Dad," Teddy whispered, "Oh--oh my god, Dad."
Something flickered across Remus's face, and then he shut his eyes and turned his head away, closing his mouth as he swallowed.
Ooooohhhh, okay, this stuff is great too. Because it means I'm hanging out for Remus' next section, all this emotional urgency building in the story... ee :).
And yes, the sex is totally hot too. Fnjksdf for the first bit of kissing :).