14 November 2010 @ 05:03 pm
Theme #15: Caught in the Act: 8 of 8  
Title: Coitus Interruptus
Author: [info]etextraordinary
Warnings: PWP
Author’s Notes: Brian answering the door while fucking is my number one QAF pet peeve, maybe next time he’ll think twice before answering the door. 4X100 word drabbles. Thank you to my awesome beta, [info]florida_minxie



Someone was knocking at the door, again. Brian moved to get up and Justin wrapped his legs tighter around his back.

“Brian, please, just don’t answer the door.”

Brian looked down at Justin, considered not getting up, then the knocking started again and Brian pulled out, causing Justin to wince. Brian pulled on gray sweatpants, his straining cock making an obvious tent in the pants. Justin groaned and rolled on to his back, squeezing at the base of his cock and slowly stroking upwards.

Brian padded over to the door, cursing as he unlocked and then slid the door open.

***

“My name is Suzie and I’m from Girl Scout troop 1842, and I’m selling cookies. Would you like to buy some cookies?”

Justin dove under the duvet and tried to will his hard on away.

“Uh. Sure. I’ll take three boxes of the caramel coconut ones.”

“Three boxes of Caramel-delights. That is $10.50.”

“Ok. Just let me get my checkbook.” Brian walked into the kitchen, sighing heavily, and making out the check for the Girl Scout. Brian handed her the check and she scampered off down the stairs. Brian shut the door, sighed, and banged his head into the door.

***

Justin sat up, still mostly buried in the duvet, when Brian came back to the bedroom. Justin watched as Brian removed his sweatpants and crawled back into the bed. Brian moved the duvet so he could lie on top of Justin. He pushed Justin back into the bed and kissed him, gently at first then building into something more. Justin was thrusting up into Brian’s crotch, and Brian was meeting him with every thrust. Brian broke the kiss and moved down to Justin’s neck, biting where his shoulder and neck met. Justin gasped and tangled his hands in Brian’s hair.

***

Brian took both of their cocks in his hand, stroking them in time with the thrusts. Justin’s head was arched back into the pillow, exposing his neck. Brian bit a string of marks into his neck and when Brian sucked hard on one particular spot, Justin came all over Brian’s stomach. With just two more thrusts Brian came, collapsing on Justin’s shoulder.

Eventually Brian rolled off of Justin and Justin said, “You know, you really don’t have to answer the door while we’re fucking.”

Brian glared.

“Besides, you got the wrong kind of cookies, I like Peanut Butter Patties better.”
 
 
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on November 15th, 2010 12:14 am (UTC)
The last line made me laugh on second reading too. And the porny bits were lovely as well. I'm not much of a porn reader these days, but the was something quietly hot about this one.

Thank you! :D
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ET: B/J Loft Sex 107[info]etextraordinary on November 15th, 2010 04:37 am (UTC)
I am so glad you enjoyed it both times you read it! Thank you so much for hosting the challenge!
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jan: 311-b/j-ani..futon sex[info]opal11 on November 15th, 2010 12:23 am (UTC)
i know how much it bothers you that brian has answered the door on more than 1 occasion while having sex, well it would only make sense that you would write about it!! and i loved it..rofl!
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ET: B/J Loft View Sex[info]etextraordinary on November 15th, 2010 04:39 am (UTC)
LOL! Sometimes I am too predictable! Hopefully Brian has learned his lesson... but somehow I just doubt it.
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frantic_quest: bk text hee nailbite[info]frantic_quest on November 15th, 2010 12:39 am (UTC)
I nearly choked on my Boy Scout popcorn when Suzie started her cookie spiel.

I'm just really glad Suzie didn't get an eyeful!

Fun and hot!
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ET: B/J Loft Sex 107[info]etextraordinary on November 15th, 2010 04:40 am (UTC)
LOL! I'm glad you didn't choke! I felt bad for Suzie, I mean just think of the lawsuit if Brian just had some balled up underwear like with Stockwell... the poor girl.

Thank you so much!
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notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on November 15th, 2010 01:15 am (UTC)
Hot for sure! But the truth is that I couldn't stop giggling after Suzie came to the door :) Very fun!
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ET: B/J Loft View Sex[info]etextraordinary on November 15th, 2010 04:42 am (UTC)
Thank you! :D I'm glad the story made you giggle!
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[info]jule1122 on November 15th, 2010 02:22 am (UTC)
Brian rally does need to ignore the door. Love the last line.
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ET: B/J Loft View Sex[info]etextraordinary on November 15th, 2010 04:43 am (UTC)
I totally agree!!! Thank you so much! :)
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rosy5000: BJ Futon Sex[info]rosy5000 on November 15th, 2010 05:23 am (UTC)
LOL At least Brian put pants on this time. Love the last line. *giggles*
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ET: B/J Loft Sex 107[info]etextraordinary on November 15th, 2010 01:45 pm (UTC)
I think he would have another lawsuit if he didn't have pants on this time! Thank you!
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rainbow1907: Brian & Justin Happy Smile[info]rainbow1907 on November 15th, 2010 07:58 am (UTC)
“Besides, you got the wrong kind of cookies, I like Peanut Butter Patties better.” LOL This line really made me crack up :)
Thanks for that, I love it! Rena :)
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ET: B/J Loft View Sex[info]etextraordinary on November 15th, 2010 01:45 pm (UTC)
:) I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for reading!
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[info]minuet9 on November 15th, 2010 01:09 pm (UTC)
One of my pet peeves too. Had a good giggle at Susie and the wrong cookies. Serves him right for getting out of bed LOL
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ET: B/J Loft Sex 107[info]etextraordinary on November 15th, 2010 01:46 pm (UTC)
I'm so glad I'm not the only one who is driven crazy by it. Maybe next time Brian won't get out of bed, and he'll just let them walk away.
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Techgirl[info]techgirl on November 15th, 2010 03:33 pm (UTC)
Thank god he put his pants on! Hot and funny, I liked it!
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ET: B/J Loft Sex 107[info]etextraordinary on November 15th, 2010 03:35 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!
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happier_bunny: b/j 311 animated futon sex[info]happier_bunny on November 15th, 2010 10:35 pm (UTC)
ACK! Girl Scout Cookies. Brian SO didn't need to answer that door.

That being said, there's something hot about Justin waiting all hot and bothered in bed for Brian. LOL
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ET: B/J Loft View Sex[info]etextraordinary on November 15th, 2010 10:37 pm (UTC)
Lol! Thank you so much Bunny. And he got the wrong cookies to boot. Hopefully Brian learned his lesson!
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ahaw9913[info]ahaw9913 on November 16th, 2010 06:36 am (UTC)
I legit snorted milk up my nose when I read this, cuz OMG, Im eating Girl Scout Cookies RIGHT NOW, I kid you not!!!

This was terrific!! And the hot porn, if only momentarily, lessened my grief for the tragic demise of the GSC Lemon Coolers...*dramatic sigh*

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ET: B/J Loft Sex 107[info]etextraordinary on November 16th, 2010 12:34 pm (UTC)
Lol! So funny that you were eating Girl Scout cookies! I'm sorry you snorted milk up your nose, did everything smell funny for a while?

Thank you so much! *glomps*
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brianslave68: bj chair!sex end kiss 403[info]brianslave68 on November 20th, 2010 09:22 pm (UTC)
Hehe, how funny that they'd get interrupted by a girl scout! Nice job!
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ET[info]etextraordinary on November 20th, 2010 10:44 pm (UTC)
:) Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
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[info]manic_fanatic on January 19th, 2011 09:01 pm (UTC)
I wonder what Brian would have done if he'd come back just to see Justin finish without him?

If I was Justin I'd be pissed off, If I was the girl scout I'd make it a point to come back again!
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ET: B/J Loft Sex 107[info]etextraordinary on January 20th, 2011 04:13 am (UTC)
Hehe. Poor Justin indeed. I'm glad you liked it!
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