Don't die! You're really good. This is like some crap I have seen on a Hermione journal on LJ:
"2day ron and i went 2 hagrid's 2getha. it wuz fun. i wonder if he likes me. maybe i shud ask harry. well u guyz i am thirsty im out 2 get some punkin juice. lata."
I agree that Hermione would be hard to capture but I think you're awesome as her! I haven't seen anything you've done that's not like her character so far, but if I did I'd (gently) let you know. So keep your head high and don't die! I hate rhyming unintentionally. K I'm off to get some punkin juice, lata! LOL