Oh, this is so wonderful! Thank you so much! I LOVE it!
Usagi and Mamoru have such a great relationship, and you've really captured it. Especially how Usagi is outwardly insecure and Mamoru is inwardly insecure. This is perfect :)
“A real fight or a you-and-Rei fight?”
PERFECT. I also love how Mamoru understands Rei, which I think he really would.
The addition of the Shitennou is wonderful, too :) SQUEE! Thank you!