Wow, I loved how you incorporated Godric's Hollow into this. And how it's Hermione's idea to make this a yearly tradition for them - ever the thoughtful one, like she thought of conjuring the bouquet of roses.
Also, this part:
"What? WHY THE HELL NOT?"
"Harry, don't shout. Movers get holidays too."
Harry has a temper, but Hermione just tells him to calm down. You really get the dynamic of their relationship!