Ack, yeah, you're right -- I intended Dallas and Eve, but there really isn't a clear antecedent for the pronoun. I'll try to patch that up before I put it on my website. ^^; I am really charmed by the image of Dallas with a pocket mouse. ...actually I think possibly Eve is his pocket mouse. ^_^
And thank you! This one totally line-jumped because -- well, partly because I have it so bad for prison scenarios, though usually not quite like this (er), but partly because there was just so much meat to it, emotionally speaking. So many chances for people to demonstrate what makes them interesting! prrrrr~