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It seems as if some wounds aren't meant to heal.. [22 Aug 2004|01:03am]

razorofyourlies
[ mood | groggy ]
[ music | Short Fuse Burning - Less Than Jake ]

Well, I suppose I should introduce myself before I expose a wound on my heart to you..
Hi everyone. My name is Carrie. I live in Naugatuck, Connecticut. I'm fourteen years old. I'm very emo and if you ever need to talk about anything I'm quite understanding. I joined this asylum because I enjoy writing out those emotions and reading what others have written. I don't usually write poems because they usually end up as a story. If there's anything else you'd like to know or any questions about what I write leave a spiffie comment or feel free to instant message me. My AIM screename is lessthanyousee.
Well here we go..

The Story Of A Broken Heart )

Comments are always nice! (:

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[20 Aug 2004|10:18pm]

plastic_penguin
[ mood | bored ]

well hello i joined this.. cuz i loveeeeeee writing .. everything stories poetry.. everything.. i mostly write poetry.. but yea.. my name is heather.. im 14.. live in ohio.. this is the first poem i ever wrote.. and after this.. i never stoped writing them :-) tell me wacha think

The End                  2-15-04
As she runs to the bathroom
Locks herself in
Looks at the razor
Wondering if she should again

Should she end it all now
Cut all she can
Just to see what happens
All in the end

Maybe pills will be better
It wont hurt as much
She dosent like the pain
But she is still tough

Theres so many ways to die
Which one has she chose
She closes her eyes
As she begins to doze

Saying her last good-byes
In all the notes she wrote
I hope they know i love them
She starts to feel afloat

Wondering what going to happen
She realizes this is not the way
Theres no way to stop it now
Its her time to pay

She tries to get up
But her body is numb
Now all she can say is
"I wish I wasnt so dumb"

She hopes to make it through
This terrible thing she did
She could just lie
But who would she kid?

She starts to drift away
And all she sees in light
Then all of a sudden
That light turns to night

As she lies on the floor
All her pain is gone
She couldnt take it anymore
Then her mom walks in and relizes hers has just begun

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hiya [20 Aug 2004|05:27pm]

mystupidmouth
[ mood | good ]

This is a great idea for a community I like it alot.

I haven't written poetry in awhile but when I do I just can't stop. I love how I can read my poems years after I wrote them and still feel the emotion I felt at that moment.

Hmm so I guess I'll post a little something. I have some deep stuff but for now I will post you the cutest poem I've ever written. I think I wrote in maybe 5th or 6th grade.. anyhoo here it is!

Kindergarden Blues

My best friend is number one, first in my life.
He's always been there throughout the struggle and strife.
Without a single word he eases my pain,
And just with a sinple hug he can keep me sane.
I have known this great guy since I was a very small kid,
But sometimes he is lost, and I don't know where he's hid.
When I feel like crying or just need a laugh
It's him I go to, he's like my missing half.
The memories we've shared are enough to write a book.
We'll always stick together like a fish on a hook.
Although his fashion sense can be quite bare,
I promise you no one will stop and stare.
Some of his favorites can be rather funny,
Like his favorite food which is surely honey.
On some sunny days we will go and play outside.
Once we had a staring contest; it ended in a tie.
When I'd play with my other friends he'd get mad,
And when he's angry at me it makes me sad.
My mom says it's not right that he's my best friend,
But no matter what he'll be there till the end.
It is good in that he knows what I like.
Like drawing, talking and riding my bike.
But I am afraid that as I get older
That he will no longer be my right shoulder.
Because as you know, next year is first grade.
And a distraction he'd be if he stayed.
I do not even know how he would fair,
Because he would be the only teddy bear!

But on days I am feeling quite muddy,
I know I can turn to my good friend, Buddy.


**eek! look at my adorable cute dorky self, writing about a teddybear haha*

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CRAZZZZINEESSS [19 Aug 2004|04:41pm]

ex_twilight607
[ mood | crazy ]
[ music | The typing keys of doom!!! ]

Thank you Lacey for this....

This is how my day went


I am slowly going crazy 1 2 3 4 Switch!
Slowly going crazy I am 2 3 4 1 Switch!
Going crazy I am slowly 3 4 1 2 Switch!
Crazy I am slowly going 4 1 2 3 Switch!

I am slowly crazy going 1 2 4 3 Switch!
Slowly crazy going I am 2 4 3 1 switch!
Crazy going I am slowly 4 3 1 2 Switch!
Going I am slowly crazy 3 1 2 4 Switch!

I am going slowly crazy 1 3 2 4 Switch!
Going slowly crazy I am 3 2 4 1 switch!
Slowly crazy I am going 2 4 1 3 Switch!
Crazy I am going slowly 4 1 3 2 Switch!

I am going crazy slowly 1 3 4 2 Switch!
Going crazy slowly I am 3 4 2 1 Switch!
Crazy slowly I am going 4 2 1 3 Switch!
Slowly I am going crazy 2 1 3 4 Switch!

I am crazy slowly going 1 4 2 3 Switch!
Crazy slowly going I am 4 2 3 1 Switch!
Slowly going I am crazy 2 3 1 4 Switch!
Going I am crazy slowly 3 1 4 2 Switch!

I am crazy going slowly 1 4 3 2 Switch!
Crazy going slowly I am 4 3 2 1 Switch!
Going slowly I am crazy 3 2 1 4 switch!
Slowly I am crazy going 2 1 4 3 Switch!


loooonnnnggg story.

I have to work on a ton of VERY complex excel spreadsheets.... EVIL FORMULAS!!!


Well I guess thats all....

~Dyami

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-----<3.+ [16 Aug 2004|09:18pm]

lesploitation
[ mood | drunk ]
[ music | dashboard ]

Howdy folks. My name is Kate and I'm a new member. I live in chicago. I'm 14 years old.. blah blah blah. I only use an insanejournal for my poems. I have a GJ (great journal) also. YEP... so this is a poem I wrote for a community on the site for my other journal. The theme had to be about how summer makes you feel. It's stupid but... here ya go!



we had innocence wrapped around us
like sunkissed precious ignorance
there was no such thing as low carb diets
and you whining about how much fatter
you look in your bikini
than last year

you dressed me up in ridiculous dresses
and i wore the brightest pink lipstick
that was your mom's...

we lived for strawberry ice cream
and barbie dolls
and we treated "Girls Just Want to Have Fun"
like it was some kind of anthem

and you can still look back and laugh
at all the stupid things we said
but i think i liked it more
when boys had cooties

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Hey all... [13 Aug 2004|09:45am]

ex_twilight607
[ mood | amused ]
[ music | Nelli FolkLore ]

I joined this community and have yet to post in it. I'll post the one I did this morning. Hope you like it. It is raw, haven't edited it.

I demand criticism. Please make it constructive, I would like to improve my style and your thoughts really help. Feel free to take a look through my journal, comment there as well.

The city I now call home...

Sitting on the curb
Watching the day go by
The cars come and go
Passing through
This sleepless wasteland
They call a city

Its a desert
A desert,
that has taken my breath away
A desert,
that I'm falling for

Never did I think it possible
That I would fall in love with this.

A place so barren
Yet so fertile
That I now call my home.

Will I ever go back?
Back from where I came?
I know not,
Time can only tell

And even it may not know


~Twilight

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Cut [03 Aug 2004|09:54pm]

deranged_piglet
[ mood | tired ]

Hey everyone. I haven't posted anything because every little piece of poetry I've written has been really raw and personal, so I thought I'd stick a poem up here for discussion. I think it's fantastic, but I don't have enough time to rave about it. I'll let you decide for yourselves what you think.

Cut

For Susan O'Neill Roe

What a thrill--
My thumb instead of an onion,
The top quite gone
Except for a sort of a hinge

Of skin,
A flap like a hat,
Dead white.
Then that red plush.

Little pilgrim,
The Indian's axed your scalp.
Your turkey wattle
Carpet rolls

Straight from the heart.
I step on it,
Clutching my bottle
Of pink fizz.

A celebration, this is.
Out of a gap
A million soldiers run,
Redcoats, every one.

Whose side are they on?
O my
Homunculus, I am ill.
I have taken a pill to kill

The thin
Papery feeling.
Saboteur,
Kamikaze man --

The stain on your
Gauze Ku Klux Klan
Babushka
Darkens and tarnishes and when

The balled
Pulp of your heart
Confronts its small
Mill of silence

How you jump --
Trepanned veteran,
Dirty girl,
Thumb stump.

---- Sylvia Plath

I think it's fantastic poetry. Really really really good. And I thank Ben for it.

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[29 Jun 2004|02:09pm]

ex_taco392
[ mood | bored ]
[ music | Hikaru Utada-Simple and Clean ]

Just another piece [rough at that] I came up with this morning...

Feet shuffling

acrosss the

situated wood.

Dancers heat

making the

room's tension

rise without

meaning.

Every move

will be

memorized

by the dancers

and mirror

both if they

keep this

rhythem up.

Instructor

just smiles,

telling them

to do it again,

or they will

not leave

today.

For this,

the dancers

do it better,

shouting out

their counts

silently,

letting their

feet shuffle

across the

situated wood.

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[28 Jun 2004|05:38pm]

ex_taco392
[ mood | bitchy ]
[ music | Sugarcult- Pretty Girl (The Way) ]

'Lo! ^_^

As an introduction, the name's Liz. I'm 13 and reside within San Diego county upon California's grounds. I've been a poet for a few years now, and find the need to build off of that branch by reading other works of art for my self and to help others construct and mold a better poet out of their soul.

The very thing that really gets me about poetry is how little it changes. Sure, there are everlasting fads of angst that come from poetry, but the words in a timely manner themselves never really change, just the people viewing and writing the sylables upon the blank tablet, creating it into an image of wonders and beauties.

Yes, I'm done now. Don't worry- I usualy don't rant that much over a period of time. Sample poetry: ((Sorry for the length e.e; And, more poetry found on my journal, along with www.freewebs.com/teh_liz ))

Take your choice,
pick just one.
You're journey
has started,
but not yet
begun.
Can you handle
the mountains,
the oceans,
the caves?
Can you file
through forests,
dreamily wanting
and yearning for
what lays ahead?
Come now, child,
let your tears fall.
As you walk along,
let them fall.
Let them fall.
You asend into
depths of youth
and old age,
you understand
things, in an
abstracted way.
Grow within yourself,
as you follow
your heart.
But if you need
to cry, come now,
child, let them
fall. Let them fall.
Journey through hate,
love, lust, and fate.
Show yourself
what you never
wanted to see.
Observe things
like never before,
with your minds eye,
let it work.
But if you walk,
and you're scared,
come now, child,
Cry to me.
Tell me your fears,
your secrets,
your beliefs.
And as you talk,
let your tears
fall. Let them
fall, let them fall.

I'm seeing with a
whole new light,
I now understand,
why for so long,
I had to search
this land.
Let me cry to you,
and tell you tales
I've once heard.
Let me call for you,
Let me allow
you to pick me up
hold me, suppoting
my quaking body,
and as I cry,
let my tears fall.
Let them fall, let them fall.

(c) me, Liz

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Hello everybody... [24 Jun 2004|09:29pm]

deranged_piglet
[ mood | creative ]
[ music | The Used - Say Days Ago ]

Hey. I don't write too much, but I've become more interested in poetry. Most of my stuff is the kind of rubbish I'd never let anyone read, full of anger and stuff like that. Poetry and assorted writing is outlet for me, as well as music, art, that kind of stuff. Not that I'm depressed or anything : ). All's good 'round here.

My writing is often quirky and weirdarsed. For example...the stream of consciousness I wrote in English : P. If you don't have any idea what I'm talking about, don't worry - you'd have to be in my mind. And trust me - you don't wanna be there ; ).

My Stream Of Consciousness

A duck in the markets

A blue and red duck

The duck has a hat

The hat is a squashed hat

I wouldn't buy a squashed hat

I would buy a nice hat

A purple hat

A soft hat

Like a sheep

Like the sheep in the pen at the markets

Next to the ducks

The blue and red ducks at the markets

 

Sorry if that's a little too Dr Seuss-like for you. They're my thoughts, and I was happy on the day I wrote it. Eh, my moods fluctuate.

I'm Frank, by the way.

 

 

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New here X3 [23 Jun 2004|11:51am]

[ mood | creative ]
[ music | Psyco le Cemu = Feel on the dark ]

I love poetry and i write it constantly i hope you like my poem i would love for constructive critiscm and i <3 this community....XDDD

Goodbye Butterfly

Masquerade until the earth claims you to the deep
A broken puppet controlled by everyone
If I closed my eyes I would see you
A butterfly fluttering in the back of my mind
Extinguished by the world’s burning touch

Poor butterfly can’t you remember who you once were?

Fluttering, a dying thing when I close my eyes
You can’t reach the climax, pathetic Butterfly
You’re heart beats an addicted pulse
Blood through veins through heart through veins
Why must you be so neurotic my dear?
Acute self-hatred running below the surface

Why thank-you I’ll only rip off your wings.

Blood flowing from emotional wounds
Sensory overload your brain can’t cope
Blood through veins through heart through veins
Smile through continuous savagery
Heart beating beating beating
Trying to mend the incessant holes

Why do you smile when your wings are broken?

Love and love and love until love is nothing
This world is pain and suffering
Holding onto your sanity yet so unaware
Fleeting glimpses of self-worth that disappear
Crying dead tears that you can’t feel and yet…

Goodbye my sweet pathetic Butterfly
Goodbye, as the self-hatred consumes, Sad butterfly..
Goodbye, as the melancholy swallows, Naïve butterfly
Goodbye goodbye goodbye…. My pathetic Butterfly

~Amber

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problems!! [29 Mar 2004|08:38pm]

ex_eurotrash99
[ mood | gRRR ]
[ music | Norma Jean (spelling?) ]

okay.. you guys should be able to make entries.. if not.. then tell me.. and i'll go and try to fix it again!! stupid thing.. and if you wanna join.. then you can join! >:D its open to anyone and everyone

- eurotrash

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[29 Mar 2004|12:54pm]

ex_eurotrash99
[ mood | okay ]
[ music | Zao ]

since no one wants to be first.. ine a sense to post an entry.. then i'll start.. >:)

your message here

look in the mirror and ask myself
am i pretty now?
razor blades industrial art
pain is just an accesory
shredded vynal tasteless fiend
and candy coated dreams
re-invent myself all for you
so am i pretty now?
stitched desire wounds that screams
tears with hope so vague
tainted smiles voice so weak
pictures of me defaced
hair that dances down the stairs
eyes closed with broken glass
tumble down violent waves
catch myself on the floor
restless creatures in my head
fight myself lost a war
and i did this all for you
so am i pretty now?
vicious bruises
shattered limbs
self inflicted mutaliation
crimsoms liquid on a canvas
pictures all made of me
never thought i'd be good enough
inner beauty not be seen
alone and broken
i've invented myself
so am i pretty now?
lying down lost alone
cry for help hold back
distorted image how i saw myself
negative energies remain intact
devistation raides in force
to create another dream
lost the source impure tantrums
and again reap rewards
leave me here go unnoticed
civilization fading fast
glitter tears diamond cut eyes
hide behind subtle masks
so am i pretty now?

your message here

and there ya go

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Yup. [13 Feb 2004|03:40pm]

ex_eurotrash99
[ mood | okay ]

Well, this is my first time making a community. Its not exactly the way i want it yet, but that will change soon. I just need members!! You guys know you want to join!! >:D please?

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