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Marie-Pierre Duclos ([info]duclos) wrote in [info]vie_en_guerre,
@ 2008-02-07 12:14:00

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I am the razor in the hands of your heart
Who: Duclos, an NPC, then Hans
What: The Rules of Knife-Fighting
When: Evening, after Christmas.
Rating: PG-13 for non-explicit violence and a decent probability of m/m kissage.
Incomplete


The first part was almost too easy.  When you know in advance not only that you will be followed, but by whom, whence, and when, a great deal of the challenge is stripped from the game.

Dicky Tremayne trusted Duclos implicitly due to the length and nature of their association, and although, of necessity, he was aware that Marie-Pierre was a double agent, he firmly believed that his friend's true loyalty lay on the side of the Resistance.  When the man subsequently referred to as Black Diamond began to have suspicions of the opposite, it had not been difficult to convince Tremayne that the man was himself a traitor - slightly complicated, yes, with the number of crossed ties involved, but not difficult.

And so the assistance of the redoubtable Tremayne was assured, should he need it, in eliminating this threat to Duclos' inherently precarious situation; but the man involved was very nearly a rank amateur anyway, and Marie-Pierre had sufficient contacts of varying degrees of authority that he was confident that Tremayne's moral support would be all he required.

The practical upshot of said moral support was that, as previously stated, Duclos knew precisely where, when and how the black diamond would be dealt, and was prepared.

One of the tricks of his trade which, for all its simplicity, never failed to utterly amuse him was the switching of roles from followed to follower.  He let his tail believe he was in charge, leading him into exactly the part of the city where he wanted him, before pulling the switch; then they wandered a bit more just for his own entertainment before he started the fun part.

He was soon forced to admit that his estimation of the other man as a mere tyro was slight overconfidence on his part.  He could only be thankful that he hadn't brought a knife to a gunfight.

The old familiar dance of death, starlit steel and silent shadows, falling into a rhythm and breaking violently out of it, back and forth, footfalls and epithets, blood on the blades, time spooling out adrenaline-slowed but still so long that the continued lack of notice from passing patrols became noteworthy.

At long last, panting parody of a lover's embrace; but most of the blood on his suit was his own when Marie-Pierre carefully worked Deus ex Machina back out from between the man's ribs.

Even so, once the cleanup work was completed, there was a darkly gleeful gleam in his eyes as he made his way home.

To the Ducks' Nest - not usually where he would choose to go on a night like this, but the arrangements with Hans had been made before the arrangements he had just completed, and he trusted his precautions would be sufficient.

Between the unexpected duration of his little revel and the extra amount of sneakiness he put into his journey back, he was running slightly late, and moreover he still looked very much the victim of violence; he could only hope Hansin would not be too worried.


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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-07 08:21 pm UTC (link)
Hans was sitting in the shadows on the steps of the Duck Nest, awaiting Marie-Pierre's arrival. It was too dark to check his watch, but he knew from the coldness of his posterior and the ache beginning in his lower back that he'd been there quite a while. He was glad that he'd worn his heavy wool coat, so at least he wasn't freezing.

To keep himself from worry, he told himself little stories about why Marie-Pierre was late. Perhaps a suicidal pig had continued the grand Metro Pig tradition, and delayed his train. Maybe he had stopped at the Occitan cafe to bring back some dinner, and Stephane was talking his ear off.

But as time wore on, the worry crept in anyhow. He felt it first in the pit of his stomach, like a cold stone, and it slowly spread through his limbs until they felt leaden. When he looked up and saw Marie-Pierre coming into view, Hans got up from the step and nearly tripped over his own feet.

"There you are Kase- where have you been? Did you stop to oversee the Elephant St--" The light tone and the rest of the sentence died in his throat. Panic took over when he got close enough to see Marie-Pierre was bloody.

"Ach Gott, Schatz -are you hurt? You're bleeding... "

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[info]duclos
2008-02-07 11:26 pm UTC (link)
"You could have gone inside instead of waiting here like the little match girl," Marie-Pierre said, bemused. "I am sorry I'm late, and I am sorry I'm bleeding - I will do my best not to get any on you. If it's any comfort, it's not all mine."

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 02:55 am UTC (link)
"There is some comfort in that some is not yours, but I'm worried about the parts of you that are bleeding," Hans said nervously.

He reached for Marie-Pierre, not caring if he got bloody in the process. "Can you walk? I could carry you. Have we bandages upstairs? Do I need to call a doctor? There is that doctor we met at Le Passant..."

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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 04:03 am UTC (link)
"I walked all the way here, didn't I?" asked Marie-Pierre with more patience than he might normally have exhibited. "Little more than scratches; I'm sure it looks worse than it is."

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 04:35 am UTC (link)
"Scratches," Hans repeated, trying to settle that in his mind so it would stop racing. "Alright."

He still held the door for Marie-Pierre, and watched him carefully as they headed inside.

"We should still get you cleaned up and make sure..."

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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 05:12 am UTC (link)
"Yes, yes. Hot water, bit of iodine, good as new, yes?"

Marie-Pierre headed inside, where he gingerly stripped to the waist, grimacing at the damage to his clothes and carefully testing all his fingers. 'Scratches' was a bit of an understatement, but none of them were bad enough to require a doctor's attention, although they hurt like hell and he was feeling a bit woozy.

"It's only to be expected," he said as he ran the tap in the bathroom, filling a glass to drink from to offset the blood loss while he cleaned up. "The first rule of knife-fighting: 'you will be cut.' Some would say that's the second, the first being 'carry a gun,' but that would take all the fun out of it, no?"

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 05:21 am UTC (link)
Hans got the towels, and foraged in the medicine cabinet until he found the iodine.

"There are rules?" Hans asked. He was still very worried, but at least now he had something to do- something on which to focus. He took one of the towels and wet it under the hot water tap, then wrung it out so it wasn't completely dripping.

"Allow me to help?" he asked, hesitating, not wanting to make things worse if it would make Marie-Pierre uncomfortable to be fussed over.

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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 05:32 am UTC (link)
"Go ahead," shrugged Marie-Pierre, whose dislike of being fussed over was tempered in this instance by the practical consideration of that whole hurting-like-hell thing. "And yes - there are rules. Rule two - or three, but for ease of numbering we'll assume that I will omit the 'carry a gun' - is 'given that you will be cut, know where it is safe to do so.'"

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 05:38 am UTC (link)
"There are safe places to be cut?" Hans asked. "Or safer I suppose is more accurate..."

He started gently daubing at the blood, trying to clean enough of it off that he could get an accurate assessment of where and how deep the actual wounds were.

Focus on the conversation, do what needs to be done, he willed himself. Panic would not help Marie-Pierre stop bleeding.

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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 05:44 am UTC (link)
"There are no major arteries in the back of the forearm, and the only danger in taking a blow to the upper arm or shoulder is the risk of tendon damage if they hit right. Which is why my left arm looks the way it does," Marie-Pierre explained, sipping at his water carefully.

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 06:01 am UTC (link)
"At least your arm is still attached," Hans said. "That is something." In keeping with what Marie-Pierre said, his arm seemed to have taken most of the damage.

Yet there was more blood - around his neck, under the line of his jaw. Hans' hands were trembling as he cleaned the blood from that area, sighing in a soft exhalation of relief when he discovered the cause of all that blood had been a fairly superficial wound. "Too close," he muttered, thinking of how bad it would have been had it been deeper, of how close it was to vital areas. "Oh Kase..."

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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 06:12 am UTC (link)
"Everyone goes for the neck," he sighed. "Which is usually the sign of an amateur, but this one seemed to actually have half a clue what he was doing. Rule three: 'cut in, cut out.' Don't bother trying to make a single killing blow; wear the opponent down by working your way inward from the side of him that is closest to you. I believe I need to sit down."

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 06:19 am UTC (link)
"Oc, sit," Hans agreed, flipping down the lid of the toilet seat.

He made to help Marie-Pierre make it over there, the worry starting to bubble over again. "Are you sure I should not get the doctor? You might need stitches. The hospital?"



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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 06:40 am UTC (link)
"I don't need any stitches," said Marie-Pierre tiredly. "A good steak, perhaps, but - honestly, Hansin, I am fine. I've been hurt worse. Which brings us to the final rule: 'no one ever wins a knife fight; one person simply loses faster.' I am very good at losing very slowly."

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 06:47 am UTC (link)
"I will endevor to remember these rules," Hans said. "And I trust that your opponent is in a much more fatal state of bleeding."

And if he wasn't, Hans vowed he would find a way to track down the person responsible for injuring Marie-Pierre and shoot him numerous times.

"I can make you something if we've food," Hans offered. "After you are cleaned up, and in bed."

He looked over the wounds, and once satisfied that they were as clean as they were going to get and reasonbly non-bleedy, he collected the bottle of iodine.

"This hurts," he said, remembering his own experiences with such. "Forgive."

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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 06:49 am UTC (link)
"Oh, he's long since stopped bleeding by now," said Marie-Pierre, with that black amusement in his eyes again and a frightening little smile twitching at the corners of his mouth.

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 06:53 am UTC (link)
"Ah, good- you're making 'the face'," Hans observed as he dabbed the iodine onto the wounds. "My faith is restored."

He took it as a sign that Marie-Pierre would indeed be alright.

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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 06:59 am UTC (link)
"I told you," said Marie-Pierre, losing the smile as he clenched his jaw against the stinging of the iodine - what is it about disinfectants that makes the application thereof hurt worse than the actual wound? "I really have no intention of letting some random sap stab me to death in an alley. No, the sap who stabs me to death in an alley will be someone important."

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 07:03 am UTC (link)
"Psh, no one is important enough to deserve the honor of getting to stab you to death in an alley," Hans said. "You must die when very old, in South America perhaps - in some completely spectacular manner that will make for grand stories for generations to come."

He finished with the iodine, and observed his work. "A few of these on your arm could benefit from bandages - but do we have any?"

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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 07:06 am UTC (link)
"Cabinet under the sink," said Marie-Pierre. "Of course I have some. Perhaps I will be run over by a pig driving a train. Retribution."

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 07:12 am UTC (link)
"In the future, pigs will gain sentience. They'll fly - and drive trains," Hans said as he opened up the cabinet. He found the bandages, and started bandaging Marie-Pierre's wounds, careful not to hurt him in the process.

"There will be a whole porcine transportation system. And you, Marie-Pierre Duclos, will have to pay an extra fare. They'll revere the Metro Pig like a martyr. Statues and everything."

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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 07:15 am UTC (link)
"Statues - before or after train strike?"

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 07:23 am UTC (link)
"After," Hans said. He was going to put away the supplies, but thought better of it. It could wait.

He looked to Marie-Pierre, and offered his arm. "Come, Kase - let me get you settled in bed. I'll make you something to eat."

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[info]duclos
2008-02-08 07:41 am UTC (link)
"Be ugly statues, then," said Marie-Pierre, pushing himself to his feet and walking carefully, trying to avoid having to accept Hans' help.

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[info]heil_hans
2008-02-08 07:44 am UTC (link)
Hans didn't force his help on Marie-Pierre, but did hover a step behind just in case it was needed.

When they reached the bed, he pulled back the covers and fluffed the pillows.

"Here we are..."

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