Perhaps something similar to what you've said, polished a bit. Hm.
Yes, I fancy His Highness, and despite my lack of royal blood, I believe I've at least half a chance. Or something or another to that tune.
Then again, I've never been one for speeches, myself. I completely fouled up the little declaration of love I gave to Lady Lirael a few months ago, stumble tongued the entire time.