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The Dragon Age ([info]thedragonage) wrote in [info]thebattleage,
@ 2011-07-01 12:41:00

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Entry tags:(plot), (thread), brighton dask, cormac murrough, vashedan

Tournament: Glory and money, or nothing
Who: Alistair, Vashedan, Cormac Murrough, Brighton Dask, Fiona Mulrooney (NPC), Linn Flannghaile (NPC), open to all.
When: 4 Solis, 5 PM
Where: The tournament grounds.
Summary: For those who excelled on the field, it’s time for the rewards.
Rating: PG

It was the hottest day of the summer so far, and they were all standing around in full armour, and Alistair guessed it would have been rather ridiculous if it hadn’t been too hot to care. The tournament field had been emptied, fresh hay spread over the downtrodden grass and the spectator areas were full to bursting. Standing on the raised platform of the honorary box, Alistair found himself distracted by thoughts of cheese, wondering if his armour was hot enough that it would melt if he… A slight cough behind him informed him of Bethany’s disapproval – not that that was unusual, she usually disapproved of him. Bethany Hawke, first disapprover of the Commander of the Grey. Maybe he should suggest that title to her…or maybe not.
Looking at the Wardens standing at attention around him, a fine show for the people of Amaranthine and the visitors, he spared another thought to what would happen if he poured a bucket of water on them (they needed some cooling, the poor chaps, but would there be steam? Maybe it would boil immediately, which would defeat the purpose…)

Stepping up to the edge of the platform, he glanced down at the little stair that would enable him to interact with the winners. It was ridiculous, here he stood with little medals and heavy pouches of coin, when what he (and probably the winners too) longed for most was to slap them on the back and buy them a cold beer. But no, they were the Order of the Grey Wardens and they had to keep the tone of things. Unfolding the paper he had in his hand, Alistair noticed how there was water stains on it, little pearls of sweat that had transferred from his indeed sweaty hands onto the paper. The ink had spread out, leaving the long speech all but unreadable, the long, fancy words smudged. For a moment he stood there, gaping stupidly at it, flailing inwards. He knew if he looked up he’d see hundreds – thousands?! – faces staring at him, waiting for him to step into the part as the dashing role of Warden-Commander, speech-holder extraordinaire. He was getting too old for this.

Well, they’d just have to be happy with a sweating, bumbling Warden-Commander.

Clearing his throat, he was relieved when his voice did not come out as a squeak, but as a dignified manly rumble. It was a little thing, but it made him a little less nervous. “Ladies and gentlemen, we are here to honour the men and women who...won.” Great start Alistair, he thought to himself, the corners of his mouth trembling with the effort not to grin.

“All of you have fought with skill and determination, but as all things must come to an end, so must there be a winner.” That sounded good, but he wasn’t sure what he meant with it though.
Reaching behind him blindly, until his fingers met the little table filled with coin purses and knick-knacks, he managed to get a hold of a purse. Clearing his throat again he called the first name, before fiddling some more to find a medal. They were all alike, simple ornaments in copper, emblazoned with the Grey Warden insignia. Hopefully the winners would wear them proudly.

OOC note: This will play out just like the rest of the tournament: if your character wants to interact further with Alistair, thank him, weep in gratitude etc, he will reply. Otherwise it’s fine to just accept the money and retire.


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[info]thedragonage
2011-07-01 10:48 am UTC (link)
“Both contestants of the melee combat with non-lethal weapons fought hard and bravely.”
Inwards Alistair winced remembering that fight, it had been exciting to watch, but slightly painful as well. He was glad he wasn’t one of the combatants then.

“But there can be only one winner. Step forward Brighton Dask of Highever, to receive the prize of seventy-five sovereigns.”
For that sum, Alistair thought, the man ought better buy his friends something chilled to drink.

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[info]brighton_dask
2011-07-05 01:55 am UTC (link)
Seventy-five sovereigns was personally an unfathomable sum, one that seemed absurd in receipt for a single competition round. Not only did the thought of having that much money fill Dask with unease, but he didn't even have a fantasy for what how he would begin to spend it. Without need, money went to waste- and Dask was comfortable with his life in Highever. His home was paid for, his sister and nephew were each provided for. Dask hadn't joined the competition for the sake of money. He had done it to prove a stupid and shallow point and now that the point had been made, he was ready to put his blush with egotism behind him.

Not to mention, accepting a prize of that sum, in front of a crowd this large marked him with the brightest theoretical red X he had ever seen. In the span of an instant, Dask would be targeted by every cutthroat, cut-purse, and confidence trickster in the crowd. For a man who didn't need or want the prize, it wasn't at all worth the risk.

When he stepped forward, it was with a sheepish demeanor. Dask was more embarrassed to face the crowd now than he had been to engage in combat. It was odd to be in the position where he stood before the Warden-Commander, and even odder still to engage him in quiet conversation in front of several hundred on-lookers. Dask shifted uncomfortably but respectfully bowed his head, "I'm afraid that I must humbly decline the prize, Warden-Commander." He couldn't believe that he was addressing the Arling of Amaranthine at all, and he felt very much that Lowtown clung to every inch of him. "I came to Amaranthine only to meet my..." He abruptly cut-off, sure that the Warden-Commander had better things to do than be besieged with the summer's heat and Dask's life story. He continued with an apologetic smile, "It was an honor to compete in your tournament, but the prize money wasn't my reason for entry- and it would be far better spent if given to those who need it... I hope you understand."

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[info]thedragonage
2011-07-05 06:20 pm UTC (link)
The younger man was clearly hesitating, and for a moment Alistair wondered if he was overcome by nerves, stepping up and receiving his prize in front of all these people. That was a sentiment Alistair could well understand, after all, and he was trying to think of something to say to make the man relax, when he instead nodded deferentially to Alistair.

At the request, his eyebrows flew up, surprise for a moment registering in his face. Alistair was not at all greedy, but he was wise enough to know how such a large sum could change the life of a man. He would have new friends, any woman easily impressed by a large money-bag, and as far as material belongings and easy pleasures went, Brighton Dask would never have wanted for anything again. The wisdom of the request therefore delighted and surprised the Warden Commander slightly, nodding back, impressed with the foresight of the decision.

"Good call, I'd say. All that coin will be awfully heavy to drag around," he replied, grinning with delight. It was refreshing to meet someone who knew the value of what he had, and did not believe that gold could buy him a better life. Usually gold bought one better boots, but rarely a better life.
"My senechal will arrange it; there are many ways such a sum could be used to better the lives of others." Looking the young man up and down, Alistair took a quick decision, deciding to trust his gut feeling, hoping it would lead him right.
"Say, can I have a word when this fancy to-do is over? I have a suggestion for you, Brighton Dask of Highever."

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[info]brighton_dask
2011-07-08 08:24 pm UTC (link)
The Warden-Commander's reaction wasn't what Brighton had anticipated, and for that he was grateful. Joking was much easier than formality. Alistair seemed less like an intimidating Arling and more like an accessible man. Brighton lacked any experience with him though, and felt uncomfortable joking back. He did visibly relax though, unwinding muscles that he hadn't even realized were tense.

"That would be greatly appreciated-" Alistair was just below the title of 'Your Grace', though really he shouldn't have been. If rumor was to be believed, the man was the illegitimate son of a King. Even though he had turned down the throne at the country's Landsmeet, he had still once been entitled to it. It was an odd thing to be standing so close to someone so influential, let alone speaking with him. Brighton couldn't joke, it wasn't his place at all, and he had no idea how to address the man. Every title seemed clunky or just beyond current station and his name was far too informal. "-Commander."

He didn't know how the money would be spent, but trusted that it would go where it was needed. It was reassuring to have the matter settled, and once the thought of so much money had passed from his life, Dask felt lighter. "A word?" Dask's face betrayed his confusion. "You could have several, but I doubt that I would have anything interesting to say." He warred with correcting Alistair's assumption that he was from Highever, and politely succumbed to the urge. "Most recently of Highever. I was born and raised in Kirkwall." Heritage was a source of pride- surely the Commander would understand.

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[info]thedragonage
2011-07-10 03:55 pm UTC (link)
The boy seemed to be over-thinking things too much, and staying silent, Alistair waited until he was done. No need to rush him, better let him have a moment, he already seemed more relaxed. Although Alistair could be a very impatient man, he did have reserves of patience that his senechal and lieutenant would never guess. But people were different than boring ceremonies, and some people different still. Had Brighton Dask been a fat, middle-aged merchant bartering for some trade contract or other, Alistair would not have waited. But young men who over-thought things were a group of people that Alistair felt he could relate to.
Besides, it was good to have some Wardens who thought before they spoke, even if that was something that lay in the far future; the offer wasn't even made yet.

"Well, probably several. I'm not known for being very concise." He was momentarily distracted, wondering what he was known for (his stunning looks? His grand speeches? Probably none of those...), before he got himself together again.
"Perhaps you have seen on the posters that the Grey Wardens are recruiting."
Someone clearing their throat was heard, a sharp sound that didn't sound at all like the person really had something to clear at all, and Alistair sighed, guessing that Bethany wished to get on with things. Only replying to the explanation about Kirkwall with a nod, Alistair rolled his eyes and made a gesture with his head towards his second-in-command.
"I have to get on with things, the ball and chain is getting restless."

Backing up a step, Alistair waited for a moment, if Brighton had anymore questions, before he assumed his Warden Commander persona again. There were more medals to give out, before he could tend to the things that interested him more.

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[info]brighton_dask
2011-07-10 04:18 pm UTC (link)
Men and women led all sorts of lives, so when Alistair indicated his 'ball and chain'- it shouldn't have surprised Dask that he was a married man. Though none of his business, it did spark an idle curiosity. He laughed at the phrase, a clean and unrestrained noise, and bowed his head to Bethany. "Of course, Commander." When he straightened his neck, his smile twitched upon being contained. "I look forward to speaking to you after your business is concluded."

He stepped back, silently responding to Alistair disengaging from the conversation. "I'm known for asking too many questions, so perhaps if you aren't a concise man- you ought to bring her. At least she'd eventually guide us to one point or another. Maker knows we'd never find it on our own."

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[info]thedragonage
2011-07-12 09:21 pm UTC (link)
Bethany drummed her fingers on her knee, staring daggers at Alistairs back. It was a mystery to her how the man could despise these occasions, and yet do what he could to make them even longer. And more tedious. While he and the Highever man surely were having a nice bit of chat, it was incredibly boring to everyone else, silently and politely waiting for them to get on with it.

Snatches of their conversation drifted back to her, and glancing at Dougal, she saw he had brought out his slate and was scribbling numbers on it. At least she couldn't accuse him of not using the time wisely, even though she rather wished he would look like he was giving the event his full attention.
"I'm in a mad house," she mumbled to herself, just as Alistair and Brighton Dask shared a jovial laugh. At times she felt as if she was the only one trying to keep them on track, but since the First Warden hadn't ordered them out yet, she hoped they were at least making a good job overall.

She cleared her throat. Another toss of wind and now Bethany could hear the conversation quite clearly. Did...did Alistair just...
He did. What did he really think that expression meant? And then...oh Maker, then it just kept getting worse.

Leaning back in her chair, sinking lower and lower, Bethany wasn't sure if she wanted to get back to the peace and quiet of her office, or box Alistair's ears. That might be translated as a wifely duty though, she'd better constrain herself.

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