Consequences are such an overlooked part of the show, and seeing them explored is one of my favorite things about fanfic, and you have such a great combination of them here: the consequences on people like Rayner of run-ins with the SGC universe, the consequences on family and friends of people like Cromwell, the consequences of being ribboned. I really like the way this plays out as a closed-room drama, too -- it's like a play, along the lines of The Desperate Hours, very compelling. And the bad guys' scheme crumbled as they turned on each other, which is very gratifying. And the wonderful Daniel-Jack friendship! Just so enjoyable -- I'm so glad that Ankh made this asylum and so glad that you posted this here!