Oooh, what a wonderful story! What to comment on first...I loved the realistic dynamics between everybody, how Harry was jealous of Lucius even when he had Gareth. I loved your characterization of Lucius. Loved Harry and Snape just falling back together. And the scene with Snape being intolerably rude by being exceptionally polite? Absolutely BRILLIANT, probably my favorite one in the story. Such a unique story as well. Thank you so much for the story! I'll be bookmarking it to read again!