YES!!!! Oh my god, this is wonderful!! exactly what I wanted! I had hoped the person writing for me would go with the holiday prompt and you did it so brilliantly, thank you!
It was as if Snape was making love to his mouth I adore this line, it's exactly how I imagine Snape to be as a lover, lucky Harry!
Minerva is priceless in this, an interfering old cat hahahaha, love her so much!
The swimming pool sex just blew my mind though, absolutely stunningly hot and Harry's first time too.. *dies of the hot*