What a lovely long story! :D Your Harry and Severus voices were wonderful. It was good to see Sirius and Remus alive and well, but wow, your James is a real prick. It was interesting to see how Ron and Hermione were the same but different. And, oh, your Harry made me giggle and shake my head. You had my heart breaking for poor Snape, and not just once either. I loved Snape's family! And your references to Equus and Shakespeare (I love sonnets! Especially the ones I can remember well enough to quote.). You'll probably be happy to know that I stopped reading briefly to find pictures of the rhodochiton and coco-de-mer. :) You and Snape have great ideas for dates and gifts. And Hogwarts definitely needs a sex education course!
I really enjoyed reading this, and it will be going on my favorites list :) Thanks for the great read!