Thank you so much for this! I have the biggest smile on my face right now. :D
I love the beginning. The dream-like quality was so well-done with Severus remembering bits and pieces, but confusing his feelings with reality. That was awesome - just what I wanted. Minerva asking his forgiveness, and his thoughts about her was perfect. And Harry volunteering to stay and sit with Severus was great. Very IC for Harry.
Ron's letter sounded just like him. And that was a great way to bring up the subject of Ginny. And to get her out of the picture quickly and mostly painlessly. Which is good in my opinion - I don't really dig the bashing of any character. So I'm glad she's happy...I'm just glad she's happy with someone other than Harry. *grin*
I think my favorite part is when Severus wakes up from the nightmare. You really nailed the change in his voice, so it was clear he now remembered everything. That was perfect. And I loved it when Severus escaped the infirmary as quickly as possible, and Harry went after him. So sweet.
When Severus asked Harry what he intended, Harry's comment about the prophecy not saying anything about snogging and shagging happily ever after cracked me up. But it was a good answer. I love that he said he didn't know and it was such a 'Harry' answer. Also, when Severus said he doesn't share - thank you for that. I love posessive!Snape.
And that last scene is just delicious. I have the voyeur thing in common with Severus, so that was my kind of sex scene. Very hot.
Thank you so much for writing this for me! You did a fantastic job with my prompt and I love it!