Re: nice story and
Hi there! This is your friendly neighborhood mod stepping in. ;-) I'm so glad you took the time to read the fic.
All of our submissions were required to be beta-read, and this fic was most definitely was beta'd, in addition to being proofread by the mods. Seemingly, there were some HTML errors that made some of the dashes appear to be semicolons. This seems to be a matter of formatting rather than SPaG know-how. We're working to fix that now.