Thank you for the great comments! I just can't do a clueless!Harry - he may not have all the knowledge of the world (wizarding or Muggle), but he's not an idiot, either. Given time, I do believe he'd develop into his own self, create his own personal world and I can see the tones of D/s being a part of that somehow. I, too, liked those same lines (as well as a few others, of course) - I like it when a reader finds something they love about what I've created.