I love the pace of it. Calling Snape the Quiet One, and Harry's hunger for magic were awesome. I even got a little awe moment when Snape gives Harry his glasses, because, really, what a silly thing for Snape to remember when Harry's been the main prize for good little Death Eaters for so long. o_0 It is short and concise, but you put in details that really filled it out- like Harry being weak on his feet. Very well done. Definitely a new fav of mine.