So, I'm running late, as usual, and am only now getting around to writing up a comment on your story. One thing is that I read this (before I'd seen the reveals) and I couldn't help thinking, I know who wrote this story. I beta'd her last story. And I was right.
It's brilliant and snarky and wild and imaginative and just amazed me quite regularly. Before this story, I would have raised an eyebrow and looked at someone funny if they suggested Lily narrating a Snape/Harry story. But now, after reading this, I'm so glad that you did.
There were so many of the little touches that I love in your writing. The way that Lily interacts with the other Marauders, and Albus and the baby. The wonderful movement of the 'show' that she's watching on TV between past and present and all of the possible futures.
And your Snape, as always, is one of the snarkiest, best Snapes being written.