What a marvelous comment. I'm so glad you weren't put off by my compulsive image-making. I love threading sensual metaphors and odd juxtapositions all through the machinery of plot. Also, whew, I'm relieved that Lily's change of heart worked for you. It was a balancing act that I wasn't sure I'd pulled off, because to the very end her feelings about Severus remain conflicted. Even her forgiveness is tinged with jealousy.
Thank you for this humbling comment; it's a privilege to know that a story of mine touched you. And apologies for this late response - December's been a pressure-cooker month!