Incredible, truly incredible. I have to admit, before reading this I wouldn't have believed that a Snape/Harry love story from Lily's point of view could be possible, much less enjoyablebut you exceeded my imagination and then some. Writing of such still is rare both in and out of fandom, and to see it used here to tell a story of such grace, such detail and thought and emotion and ingenuity, impresses me beyond words. The story rings true to the very core.
Bravo. This is one of the best HP fics I've ever read. What a wonderful gift it must be!